Like the frame and the yellow. Dont like the decals on the top tube, and too many shades of red. Not a fan of the stem.
But, its your bike and you obviously do like it. I would go for black parts and tone down some of the red ano. Frame itself would look great with older 97/8 style Kona graphics I reckon.
I have a bike with loads of red on it, people tell of they're all different shades but I'm colourblind so they all look the same to me! I like what you've done, looks like it was fun to spec and build.
I dont mind the Kona logo in modern guise, I just think the Kula decal could be more interesting. Looks kind of like a normal typed Microsoft word print, whereas at least the Kona decal looks more interesting.