anyone masterful with the british language? - sorted now

[lewis1641]

just done an ebay listing. normally they just flow but this one took some doing. does it read ok? can i word it better?

http://cgi.ebay.co.uk/ws/eBayISAPI.dll? ... 0619274002

danka

 

[legrandefromage]

The BBS RX2 wheel pictured was polished my us

At present we are not set up for THE/ ANY repainting of the wheels but this can be outsourced at competitive prices.

 

[barry2017]

There's a couple of things. If it wouldn't be taking a liberty to rewrite it, I'd suggest:

Hi and welcome to Map-Tech wheels.

If your wheels are curbed, corroded, or moisture has penetrated the lacquer then we can help! Our specialist equipment safely smooths out curb marks where necessary, then gently removes your existing lacquer.

We then refinish the wheels so they look as good as new. Look at the difference our treatment has made to the BBS RX2 wheel in the picture!

The buy it now price is our charge to refinish a set of four wheels with light kerb damage and flaking lacquer. Tyres can be removed and refitted for only £15 extra. We can repair more extensively damaged wheels, and can arrange for wheels to be repainted at very competitive prices; please contact us to discuss your exact requirements.

Our postage covers both collection and return of your wheels.

Any good?

 

[lewis1641]

chers lgf - told you i was bad

thanks chris. i have poached that in its entirety if that is ok!

i owe you a pint

 

[barry2017]

It looks OK, but you need to remove either your or my reference to postage covering collection and return.

 

[lewis1641]

done!

 

[barry2017]

How embarassing

It's kerb, not curb.

Mustn't trust spellcheckers so much.

 

[Drapoon]

hi dude,

Don't spose you can repair diamond cut Monza 2's? (mk5 gti)

The misses decided to re-model one fo mine on a kerb, doh

 

[lewis1641]

Thanks chris, i'll change it.

Sent you a pm drapoon