Your thoughts please....

rosstheboss

Retrobike Rider
I've just redone our company's website and I was wondering what you guys think of it, I know it's not the flashiest in the world (it doesn't need to be) but some constructive criticism would be nice.... unless you think it's perfect haha!!!

www.evergreenroofgardens.co.uk
 
Nice. Tasteful and slick.

A couple of minor suggestions, though.

1. The affordance is wrong on the front page. There's quite a bit of information in the website, but without accidentally moving their mouse over the image, it's not obvious to your visitors that the site contains any more than that. As it stands, it looks a bit like your domain has been taken over by a parking company.

2. The way the gallery pictures start out blurry is a pain. I thought they were just badly taken photos at first.

All looks as it should in Firefox 3.5.3 in Linux though.
 
^^ what he said about the front page. At least have your menu bar on there. I prefer menus at the top of a page as well.

BUT I want a green (or brown) roof.

sigh ... one day.
 
Subject matter is too high up the page, ot needs to come down slightly more to the middle.

Evergreen Roof Gardens should be written with a capital before each word and slightly bigger as its a nice name, make more of it.

The pics in the gallery are nice pics but seem quite dull. I had never heard of a roof garden for business premises before but i think its a great idea and i dont think all the pics capture how amazing your product is, and it reallty is brilliant!

I dont think the description really explains enough about what the products are and do. They are great and i want to be told why they are great.

When you click the link to Brown Roofs its not good. Their website is so much more comprehensive it makes yours look super basic.

I have to say that the front page going though just doesnt seem to do the amazing product justice. These days with concrete everywhere and dull roofs your product is fresh and interesting and complys with the latest thinking in the world. I think it needs to jump out and tell us why we should all embrace such a thing.

I hope i have not been rude or too harsh. I will however be pointing this out so my team as i like it a great deal!
 
Personally I'd pull the benefits out a bit more - the point is that not only is your product a fantastic thing for biodiversity, but it also provides extra insulation etc.

The little links at the bottom seem too small and fiddly

I liked the defocused images sharpening - for me it was very fast and felt Ok.
 
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