Why is that incorrectly laced? QR is on the wrong way round sure......but the wheel build looks fine.
Also......how else do you learn if not by making mistakes.
On a rim brake front wheel in a cross pattern the outer spokes should trail and the inner spokes lead so that there is symmetry on both sides of the hub. This wheel is laced wrong on one side and is ultimately less strong. It’s a common mistake when building front wheels and it would have been nice if the wheel builder had spotted the error prior to tensioning it up.
It should be a lovely bike when done, I just don’t think the photos show the same attention to detail in putting it together as is shown in selecting the parts. I’m sure ultimately its will all come together nicely but there’s also nothing more frustrating than damaging your paint putting the front derailleur in the wrong spot or stripping a chain ring bolt because you put your chain ring in the wrong position, especially as it takes just as much effort to do it right first time as do it wrong.
There is plenty of easily accessible information out there from other peoples’ mistakes so it is possible to learn without repeating them.