i think on paper it's not a bad spec at all but personally i think you have a little too much going on there.
spins aren't everyones cup of tea and tend to suit other brands like GT or the more wacky frame designs out there, also some people think putting modern spec on a classic frame is like blasphemy, personally i prefer to keep it period-ish correct although done correctly Neo-retro as it has been termed can be cool.
and this is just me but i have never liked red, sorry. i love panaracer tyres but not the coloured stuff.
i would just say tone it down a bit and lose a few of the accessories to give it a more classic look.
the most important thing though is do you like it and the way it rides? if so, leave it alone and politely say piss off to everyone!!
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